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Jim Melvin's avatar

Excellent writing. Clean and colorful. It really draws the reader in.

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David's avatar

Very nice storytelling here, descriptive aand enticing - love observations like this

'It was four in the afternoon. I counted three other people in the car: a man with long sideburns, a girl in a red hat reading a book, the woman with the giant umbrella. They looked irritated but not irate. After all, the metro breaking down in Paris was an all too common occurrence.'

I wrote a subway short story on my Substack - writers do observe well, check out 'street punks' if you fancy a read - and keep up the great writing! Fiction Attic :)

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