Great story. Love the back and forth narrative contrast between the benign normality of the gigs and the absurd potential in their inevitable encounter with Monkey Island. God job, Don.
This story made my day. Don Carroll, you are hilarious. Please expand this mofo to a broad, sprawling thing about Kissimmee and its environs and give us the monkey attack in detail. Give it to us.
Amazing job, Mr. Carroll! I loved the subtle change from some guy who tried out the Chuckle Factory to you being that guy.
Great story. Love the back and forth narrative contrast between the benign normality of the gigs and the absurd potential in their inevitable encounter with Monkey Island. God job, Don.
A nostalgic piece. I liked it.
This story made my day. Don Carroll, you are hilarious. Please expand this mofo to a broad, sprawling thing about Kissimmee and its environs and give us the monkey attack in detail. Give it to us.
Great read and I love that subtle reveal in the middle of the story. It gave the narrator their own particular quiet ache.