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Stuart Watson's avatar

Great story. Love the back and forth narrative contrast between the benign normality of the gigs and the absurd potential in their inevitable encounter with Monkey Island. God job, Don.

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

A nostalgic piece. I liked it.

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Bull Garlington's avatar

This story made my day. Don Carroll, you are hilarious. Please expand this mofo to a broad, sprawling thing about Kissimmee and its environs and give us the monkey attack in detail. Give it to us.

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Luis Garcia Romero's avatar

Great read and I love that subtle reveal in the middle of the story. It gave the narrator their own particular quiet ache.

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