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Trey Hinkle's avatar

Wow. Brilliant story, Denise. Deeply affecting. I laughed out loud multiple times. The story made me happy in a sad way or sad in a happy way

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Denise S. Robbins's avatar

Thank you Trey!

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Dave's avatar

Beautiful story! Intriguing, emotionally engaging tapestry of thought experiment, love, and philosophy. Felt for the husband as well as the narrator. Thanks for a great read 🙏

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a gentle breeze's avatar

this was stunning!

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Gregory Von Dare's avatar

Well rendered story. Fine breezy dialogue. I liked it but thought the couple stayed too long at the fair.

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