Dead Inside

[Trey Hinkle]

Wow. Brilliant story, Denise. Deeply affecting. I laughed out loud multiple times. The story made me happy in a sad way or sad in a happy way

[Denise S. Robbins]

Thank you Trey!

[Kal Applbaum]

Good story. Thanks.

[Dave]

Beautiful story! Intriguing, emotionally engaging tapestry of thought experiment, love, and philosophy. Felt for the husband as well as the narrator. Thanks for a great read 🙏

[Ricardo A. Martagón]

Lovely story, Denise. Both moving and funny at the same time 🤩👌

[Denise S. Robbins]

Thank you so much!

[Ricardo A. Martagón]

My pleasure! 👹

[a gentle breeze]

this was stunning!

[Gregory Von Dare]

Well rendered story. Fine breezy dialogue. I liked it but thought the couple stayed too long at the fair.